Thursday 10 October 2013


The news "Brazil lottery winner escapes murder plot" was a cruel fact about consequences of the lack of affection. In my opinion, his father was not fulfilling his obligation when Fabio was young. The main reason which led him to the extreme was lack of parental affection and communication. That was a serious problem between his father and himself. Moreover, it’s a serious problem that the entire society must tackle so that to stop similar incidents from happening again. Children in the absence of love and warm environments tend to form a ruthless, selfish personality. Education and family affection are highly necessary in order to crack down the possible of criminal behavior. 

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  1. A lot of interesting issues. Remember to focus on one and give more details and explanation. Try to use transitions to make your writing more fluent.

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