The news "Brazil lottery winner escapes
murder plot" was a cruel fact about consequences of the lack of affection.
In my opinion, his father was not fulfilling his obligation when Fabio was
young. The main reason which led him to the extreme was lack of parental
affection and communication. That was a serious problem between his father and
himself. Moreover, it’s a serious problem that the entire society must tackle
so that to stop similar incidents from happening again. Children in the absence
of love and warm environments tend to form a ruthless, selfish personality. Education
and family affection are highly necessary in order to crack down the possible of
criminal behavior.
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